User talk:Cass1604/sandbox

Peer review from Yuxin Wang:

Summary: The article talked about the connection between chronic alcohol intoxication and body changes. It will influence cortical atrophy and change brain in mass and volume. In several studies, they use the comparison between alcohol and non-alcohol participants to gain the change in the brain with chronic alcohol intoxication. However, longitudinal studies suggest that some of these brain damages are partially reversible with abstinence, and long-term abstinence can treat more and deeper in brain than short-term abstinence.

Major Point: You have clear organization about the article with Possible Causes and Treatment, and you mention the conditions of chronic alcohol intoxication comprehensively with comparison study, treatment study, and short health control. However, I think it is better to add some own points to connect all information from sources together to make ideas clearer. You can also propose an ideal and use the other sources to enhance it.