User talk:Cassandradevine

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Human Security
Good start to the history section. I especially liked your tie in with what has been written already. As for the historical development, I would not go back to the Peace of Westphalia etc... but instead focus on Human Security's post-Cold-War emergence as an alternative to the flawed national security and development status quo. You could also talk about the obstacles to the Human Security approach since 9/11. The point of this section is to provide readers with some political/historical context for Human Security's emergence, not to revisit the history of international relations. Keep things brief ...quality, not quantity is what we are looking for. best of luck and keep up the good editing. --LMCinHK 00:36, 10 May 2006 (UTC)