User talk:Cassidypoodle/Siphamia tubifer

Peer Review
1. First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?

This article is lacking a lot of information being that there’s only one paragraph for the whole article. The paragraph that is being added to this articles contains enough of information to know what the topic is about.

2. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?

The author is adding unique and important information that would help the readers understand what is Siphamia tubifex and what’s it’s used for. Like stated before, the article lacks information so this would be a good start when adding more information.

3. What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

With only adding a couple sentences to this article, there wouldn’t be much improvement but the information that is provided will help.

4. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!

The author adds what the bacteria is, how do they use it, and what it’s used for. My article doesn’t give that information so I will be adding that.

Chassgraves (talk) 11:22, 20 October 2023 (UTC)