User talk:Cat2120330347/Medical-industrial complex

Suggestions for article
Hi, CatherineGCC! You did a great job on your article! Your article is well-written and portrays a very important topic. You have explained things thoroughly, and it is very easy to read and is accessible for all English-speaking populations. The expansion of this article will allow for greater conversation on this topic and will hopefully make tangible impacts!

I think you could expand on a couple of sections in this article. The Laws and Policies sections could expand to include other policies that have been implemented. Also, you could add more populations that are severely affected by the medical-industrial complex and elaborate on why that happens. The lead should be expanded, as well. Currently, it does not give a good overview of what is in the article, it only defines the term.

I hope this helps to make your great article even better! --Mmemorablemoments (talk) 23:37, 26 October 2022 (UTC)