User talk:Cation2020/Liu Na

Liu Na Article Review
(Note: The editor shared a google doc with me so that I could review her work and leave my review here on the talk page) The editor has a good start with the article on Liu Na! The education portion flows well but could use some refinement in terms of transitions and verb tenses. While the lead is concise, it could be strengthened by additional information to convey the significance of Liu's work. For the "Publications" section, stating that her work has been categorized as "highly cited" by the Web of Science would be helpful. Then for the "Awards" section, a brief description of each award would help readers understand the significance of each honor. Lastly, the references could be further developed with more sources. Overall, good framework! --Cation2020 (talk) 17:41, 28 January 2020 (UTC)