User talk:Catlover561/sandbox

Hi Marissa, when we meet let's discusss what additional sources you have found on Aoki, and what changes you plan to make from here. Elyssafaison (talk) 03:38, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

Hello peer reviewers, I am still working on translating a couple of (complex) Japanese web pages, so I probably will not have written all I want to until at least Sunday night. Sorry for my lateness Catlover561 (talk) 05:44, 18 February 2018 (UTC)

Translations will take a while, so I can't blame you. Based on what you have so far, I like the lead section that you created. It added some good points that will make understanding the article faster. Unfortunately, I don't personally see any things that can be changed because you plan to get more information from the translations. So for now, keep up the good work.ATang1392 (talk) 05:18, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi! This is a great start - I can't wait to see what else you will be adding to the article! Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:07, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

This is a really good article so far, I really like the sections you added. I guess one suggestion I would make would be to add a bit more to the personal section, just so we could know a bit more about her life. Maybe also add more to the "Claims, Aims, and Criticisms" section to make it a bit more clear. But ya, looks great so far! Anniefdunn (talk) 04:38, 22 February 2018 (UTC)