User talk:Cats&Books/Hegemonic masculinity

I can see how your addition of a source about men and their interaction with mental health can strengthen this article, especially in the "health" section. The article as it is right now does discuss men's willingness to seek health from others and medical professionals. But with one of your sources you expand on this notion, to discuss how this assumption about men's mental health symptoms have also systematically worked to their detriment. My only question/critique is that I am not sure how you want to use your first article to add to the article. Is it to help add sources to support the preexisting paragraph, or is there additional information that can be useful that you did not mention yet? Great work so far! --MFol2017 (talk) 22:52, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

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You have some good sources from which to add useful materials to the article, Cats&Books, it's just that I don't yet see the actual edits here, so it's difficult to offer much feedback. It does seem as if your plan to add something about the DSM problem would be useful. I look forward to your addition. --Jbdolphin (talk) 07:22, 12 May 2021 (UTC)