User talk:Caymansimpson11/sandbox

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Your topic is a significant one, and I'm glad to see you give it the thought it deserves. Your assignment requires three sources, though. I like what you've pulled from the one you have, but can you find other good sources as well? JAirhart 20:38, 12 March 2019 (UTC)

Your draft looks great. I like how you changed the wording and structure of the paragraph to help it flow better. I think this is a good draft but I also think you should find some more mistakes in the article or find more places that need improving and add those to your draft. Zakattak13 (talk) 15:04, 13 March 2019 (UTC)