User talk:Cazzlong/sandbox2

This looks like it's coming along. Are you going to integrate your changes into the existing page? . .E.g. Filmography, etc.?

some final things
You should integrate the articles you cite into your citations - - i.e. don't cite by including the link to the SFSU database. Instead, cite as you would for an essay or research paper, author, article name, source, date, etc. Otherwise, I think things are looking good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Profhanley (talk • contribs) 18:18, 3 December 2018 (UTC)

Theo Mata (Dom Peer Review)
Overall, the bulk of your article I think is fine. But to make it a little stronger I would suggest adding like 2-3 more sections. One can be like "reception" where you can talk about how his films are taken and received in popular media. You can also add some notable actors that have worked for him. Add more to the prominent films to make it a little bit lengthier. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Theo91297 (talk • contribs) 20:02, 6 December 2018 (UTC)