User talk:Cbeedy/History of computer science/GZhen Peer Review

Hi GZhen, Thank you for your feedback. I agree with your evaluation that the lead could be modified a bit, giving more of an outline of the article's entirety. I also 100% agree that the chronology needs to be addressed to better flow with the rest of the content. It makes more sense to go in order of the dates listed for computer science events. I will look over the article better to correct the grammar and spelling mistakes in the randomness and creativity section and rephrase that statement. As for my sources, I found these books online that I was able to read from the pages described. I generated all of the citations with the DOI number linked with a page number of the reference I am talking about. I also was not 100% if this was allowed. I assumed it would be since you can find the reference article on that page in the book. My title of the article was just a reminder to me where I want to place my article and what I wanted to talk about. I intend to add to the existing title of "John McCarthy, Marvin Minsky and Artificial intelligence" without heading. I may attempt to improve what you have suggested for the Lead and the article's Chronological order.

Thanks, --Cbeedy (talk) 14:27, 11 March 2021 (UTC)