User talk:Cbenyola/sandbox

The Audi e-tron article needs an update to a lot of its information. Some of the pictures on this page do not reflect the current actual e-tron models and concepts that Audi is working on. I would like to add information about the future of Audi and electric cars. In the near future, Audi plans to have at least 1/3 of their new production cars be electric. Each electric car will focus on quick charging, fast acceleration, and high range. Each car will also be equipped with Audi's signature AWD Quattro. Audi produced an e-Tron this year(2019) and I would like to update the picture and information about the new e-tron which is an SUV. I also would like to add information on the e-tron GT concept car and the PB18 e-tron. The SUV is already produced and is available for purchase. The other two concept cars are to be produced in the near future and are the only electric concept cars by Audi at the moment.

This is the current GT concept Specs(These values are estimates from the website and may change):

Horsepower: 434 kW or 590 hp 0-62.1 mph: 3.5 seconds 0-124.3 mph: 12 seconds Estimate Range: 248.5+ miles

This is the current E-tron SUV: Starts at $74,800 Horsepower: 300 kW or about 408 hp 0-62.1 mph: 5.5 seconds Range: 160 miles

Cbenyola (talk) 03:59, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

Delmond's Peer Review
The article is giving good information about the Audi e-tron. The biggest issues for me looking at the original article is the lack of clarity of focus in the introduction. The two-lined introduction briefly tells what the term e-tron means and then throws you into the article. I struggle to see an actual structure throughout the original article, and the sections filled with statistics and numbers are sourceless, thus making them hard to believe in some cases. I believe that your proposed changes are great and will positively lead this article in the direction of completion. There is also a heavy emphasis on numbers throughout this article, including prices which are subject to change. Probably less direct use of numbers are needed if sources contain such numbers.

Dwylrcbc (talk) 03:24, 13 March 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review completed ( Assignment 7)
I peer reviewed Dessiah97's article. Cbenyola (talk) 04:09, 20 March 2019 (UTC)

Response to peer review
Dwylrcbc, Thank you for the peer review. I think I definitely need to create a structure of some sort. I've been searching my sources and throwing any information I like into my page. Before I move it into the article I will create an outline of information and an organized pattern to the information I'm adding and also already on the page. I think it is good to include the numbers of the concept cars because they are impressive but I will be sure to cite them and note they are subject to change. Thanks for taking the time to review and I'm glad you like my general idea of improving the page. Cbenyola (talk) 03:30, 26 March 2019 (UTC)