User talk:Cbrett814

JFW | T@lk  06:08, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Pharyngeal gaps
Hi Cbrett814

Your entry on Pharyngeal gaps is an appropriate subject for the pharynx page and it looks anatomically accurate. However, as it stands it is not formatted. It appears to be cut and pasted directly from another document, and there is no prose to explain or integrate this passage with the rest of the page. In other words it is pretty much incomprehensible to anyone without a specialist interest in the subject (who will probably know the pharyngeal anatomy in any case.) Any discussion of pharyngeal gaps really needs to include a proper discussion of the pharyngeal constrictor muscles. Can you try to format, give references, add some discussion of how the structure relates to function etc? thanks Jellytussle (talk) 15:46, 4 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Hi. Thanks for taking the trouble of adding anatomy content to Wikipedia. However, I have to agree with Jellytussle on the edits to pharynx. I have temporarily removed the content, but feel free to add it back with some context, references and wikilinks. Let me know if you need a hand with anything. JFW | T@lk  06:08, 5 August 2008 (UTC)