User talk:Cbutron/Urban geography/BCBulldog2023 Peer Review

Quick Thoughts!
I think you guys did an overall great job! There are some things that can be added to really round it out and make it really solid, looking forward to the final version! Again, Great job! BCBulldog2023 (talk) 08:51, 27 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello BC bulldog.
 * Your review helped me get some clarity on our topic, since this topic is not well-developed it is a bit difficult to find our information and to incorporate the information so it can flow smoothly.
 * I will definitely take your advice on the lead section where you said that we should give context as to why the topics we chose to add are important. I will fix the sources and references, thank you for that.
 * Thank you so much!! Ash the dragonfly (talk) 16:51, 1 November 2022 (UTC)