User talk:Ccthehorsie/Henry Bibb

Peer review
The lead or the introductory/ biographical information regarding Henry Bibb have been updated. In addition, it alludes to information later detailed within the article: including his residence, his career work and his family. The lead is compelling and written with detail. However, the article will benefit from more citations from sources when making a claim in the "content" sections. The article can also use a grammatical revision in certain areas with regard to punctuation--and sentence wordiness. The sources provided are good--all peer-reviewed, reliable and up to date. The article's subheadings (i.e. Letter from Henry Bibb to John Calkins) should be changed and/or included under a different heading--since it is not prominent enough to be its own heading. (the information provided can be included under legacy/biography sections. The picture, as well as the caption, adhere to Wikipedia's regulations. However, I would suggest either, the picture of the handcuffs under the slavery subsection, or including pictures for the other subsections to maintain coherence. ReeseJ05 (talk) 19:43, 29 November 2022 (UTC) ****