User talk:Ccurley224/sandbox

So for your article you could add some of the child labour propaganda, you could add info about the International Labour Org. Some of the sentences seem short and choppy, you might want to work on combining or lengthening some of these sentences. You could also create links in this page to other pages such as the 1841 Factory Act in Britain, Fair Labor Standards Act was passed in 1938. Discuss current discrimination laws in the work place- add how students have to get working papers from their schools. In the changes taking place section you could add a graph or some reseach about how child labor is decreasing.

Andrew Brown Review
The article is completely on topic going through the history of how the law came about. It would be hard to add to the the history of child labour due to the fact the depth they go into. They could go in more depth about how this law effects kids internationally. In the begaining you list a lot about the leaders but only a brief details, possibly expanding on that. There should be a few key Child Labour Cases provided in your Wikipedia page. I really do like the list of the wages throughout every state. I gives us as the reader context to where each state is with that issue and it does involve children labour laws. You might possible need more sources for your page. I do like the outlook you have for what your plans are. Just continue to expand on that and refine you're topics. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AndrewBrown 880 (talk • contribs) 16:21, 24 April 2019 (UTC)