User talk:Cdnbyu/sandbox

Your citations 1-5 are not attached to any information. It's just a formatting error, but be sure to put the citations after the information they were used for, not just at the top of your article. Chinny11 (talk) 15:32, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

I'm not sure if "solvent mode" and "dynamic mode" each need to be their own level 1 heading unless you plan on adding a lot more information. Perhaps combine them into one and use sub headings, or just two separate paragraphs. Chinny11 (talk) 15:39, 15 November 2016 (UTC)

I would make sure to link the information in your new paragraphs to outside sources as this will help those that are less familiar with some of the technical/scienctific words that can't be simplified, such as the mineral "mica". I would also suggest that you add a section of some of the discoveries that were made using this technique. For someone who hasn't researched it and is trying to understand how it works, it would be nice to see how others have successfully used this technique to discover something. Wintertime2029 (talk) 20:46, 27 November 2016 (UTC)