User talk:Cdt the chemist/sandbox

Feedback from Will
Hi - You've done some great work so far. I've got three pieces of feedback for you Keep up the good work! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:00, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
 * First - Try to avoid using words like "inspirational" since that implies a personal opinion. Take care to ensure that the content reflects what the sources say and nothing more. It takes some getting used to, but some of the other sections of this article do a great job of this!
 * Second - Speaking of sections, consider splitting this article into multiple sections like "Research" and "Awards."
 * Third - Make sure that every assertion you make has a citation to back it up. The Johanna Ivaska does a great job of this if you want a good example.

feedback from Elysia
I agree with Will, make sure you are maintaining a neutral point of view with the subject by avoiding "flattering" words and phrases.
 * remove the instances of the title "Dr." per MOS:DOCTOR
 * related to above, just refer to the subject by her surname after the lead sentence where you list her full name (MOS:SURNAME)
 * I've formatted some of your references. I noticed that you have a lot of empty ref tags; I've just removed those.
 * I've added some "citation needed" tags to sentences that are uncited. In general, it's a red flag if a paragraph ends without a reference. If you need a refresher on how to add citations, you can revisit this slide of the training :)
 * consider adding some links to other articles so that readers can explore related topics.

Hang in there! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:48, 30 November 2018 (UTC)