User talk:Cebeck/Magmatic water

Hello Cebeck, I have reviewed your article for Magmatic water as of yesterday afternoon. Hope it helps. Rsvetlov (talk) 05:26, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

George's comments
I like the amount of detail that you have added. The image is useful, make sure it is one that can be used on Wikipedia with no copyright issues. I am not as taken by an article that begins with a topic other than the one that is the title of the page. Something along the lines of Magmatic water is an aqueous phase containing a set of minerals that have been dissolved by the action of magma".

I am a little confused about the equation that you have added to the water in silicate melts section. It isn't balanced and doesn't make a lot of sense to me. I think it is OK to just state what compounds are formed in equilibrium without using an equation. --Drglheard (talk) 16:26, 11 March 2021 (UTC)