User talk:Cedarlivin/sandbox

Awesome start. I would like to hear more about the history of terracotta, like how did different cultures use terracotta. Maybe include a section on the recipe/chemical make up of terra cotta or the properties of terracotta as well as how it is worked for use on a building. Might be nice to link to cool examples of terra cotta, like detail mini case studies. Maybe include a section on basic conservation. All in all the sections are very good, but it would be nice if they were expanded a little.

Instructor comments
I agree with your peer reviewer; this is an awesome start. Please perform a final copy edit and double-check your use of citation templates before moving this to Wikipedia.

Elizabeth Linden Rahway (talk) 22:01, 26 November 2017 (UTC)