User talk:Celesteeynon/sandbox

Thank you for writing about someone that no one has done so yet, not in wikipedia at least. Things you could do to improve your biography are: 1. In your introductory paragraph could you say why her work is interesting and worth knowing? One sentence that gets people in, captures their attention 2. Later career section: There is only one reference, and it is the same you are using in section 1, could you find a different reference, maybe another source so that your view is broader than the one in the Australian Dictionary of biographies, that would enhance the quality of the biography 3. Later life: Are there any pictures of some of her creations? That would be great to add. Maybe they are not available, that is also OK. --CKuhnH (talk) 10:09, 14 January 2020 (UTC)