User talk:CeliaRamirez/sandbox

Peer Review
This article is well organized! Your use of a table of contents and subheadings works well to divide the article into easily accessible pieces. I think that this article needs more information and the use of more than one reliable source. Expanding on the childhood and education of Xochitl Julisa Bermejo would help to expand the background section. Also, adding what works have been published would avoid the vague statement that they have been "published multiple times." I think that your source from Cultural Weekly is a good start. There is also information on Xochitl Julisa Bermejo on the poetry foundation website, this might be helpful! Expanding the length of these sections will allow their importance to be shown. Good start though! Jamieowens (talk) 22:21, 10 October 2018 (UTC)

Sam's Peer Review
Your review needs more information I think. Trying expanding on your author's biographical information, bibliography, and so on. Good start though. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sdallaire (talk • contribs) 01:55, 17 October 2018 (UTC)