User talk:Celiaoleshansky

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Hello, Celiaoleshansky, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi! I saw your email about the move but I did want to let you know that I had some notes/concerns about the draft. My main concern is that this is written as more of an essay/reflection on the topic rather than in the writing style that Wikipedia prefers. We can only summarize what has been explicitly stated in the source material - we cannot draw our own conclusions or comparisons based on the source material. The sourcing is also a little problematic in that there isn't a lot of it and it's just popular press sources. You can use popular press sourcing, but it's not really the strongest possible sourcing out there.

I'm also somewhat concerned about this topic being redundant to the existing article on Racism in the Arab world. I can see a good argument being made for individual articles for each country, but at the moment the draft needs too much work. My recommendation would be to continue to work on this and to use similar articles as a guideline on writing style and sourcing. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:15, 6 December 2018 (UTC)