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Intertwine Peer Review Session (3/10):

The history section should be one of the first things said about lumpectomy. I would move it up.

As an overview, you can rely on a basic who, what, why, where, and when structure to describe the procedure, how it dervied, why it's necessary and etc. Then the history section. Who this affects/helps. What the procedure consists of. The effects of the procedures. Cautions concerning the procedure. Perhaps, input commentary from professionals/organizations/medical associations.

All links work which is good. I would define some jargon too like: metastatic disease