User talk:Cen1917/Janet Abbate

Plan for the Rest of the Semester
Based off of the feedback given from the peer review and from Dr. Shaw, I plan to develop my article in many ways. I plan to add more research to the writing, including more about Abbate's research and what it shows to add to why she did the research that she has. I also plan to add more about how her research can be applied in other ways. I also plan to remove the parts about Raymond Henry. Those paragraphs were there as part of the beginning of the semester's assignments and I was not sure wether they could be removed or not yet, so I will do that. I also plan to cite my sources correctly and improve them overall to ensure they are all cited correctly and credit is given to the original researchers and sources. Overall, my plan is to add more information along with citations and just to continue to develop and improve the article. I will do all of this by using the information and guides that have been provided throughout the course. Cen1917 (talk) 03:42, 27 November 2023 (UTC)