User talk:Cerasam/sandbox

help me I am not sure if this is a good start for a first paragraph?

Cerasam (talk) 19:29, 17 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Hello. I have disabled the helpme template on this page in the meantime as it is a duplicate. Replies to your question will be placed in the first helpme template you created in your talk page. Thank you.-- Obsidi ♠ n Soul  19:54, 17 February 2011 (UTC)
 * (edit conflict, so I'll put it at both...) Hi Cerasam. I think it's a very good start to an article, though not quite ready for mainspace yet. You'll need to put in some sources, and explain different aspects of the topic. Have you had citing sources on Wikipedia explained to you? I like your writing style though and I think this could be a great article. I see The Rambling Man is your mentor, did you consider asking his opinion? He's very good at such things too. I'm also one of the Online Ambassadors, so if you ever want another opinion on something you're working on, feel free to leave me a message at my talk page.  Worm    TT   19:57, 17 February 2011 (UTC)