User talk:Cereynolds522/sandbox

Hi, I am new to editing Wikipedia articles. I am contributing to the page on Juan Luis Vives in terms of his psychological contributions for college credit. I have done some research, but I am hoping for feedback from the community on how I can improve my writing skills and overall appeal of what I have thus far in my Sandbox.

Thanks! Cereynolds522 (talk) 18:10, 12 November 2013 (UTC)