User talk:Cewb23/Evaluate an Article

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You killed this exercise! Killed it dead. Clund07 (talk) 23:59, 2 October 2023 (UTC)


 * I wonder if you could add the video link to the "External links" section at the very bottom? Then you don't necessarily have to figure out a way to make it fit into any of the article sections --- though I think it would certainly be a legitimate addition to the "history" section to note, West St. Paul was featured in the Walker Art Center's 2008 exhibition World's Away through the inclusion of... yadda yadda :)
 * Here is the surviving archive of that exhibition on the Walker's website -- this page doesn't mention Carolyn, but I'll bet you would be able to find a Strib or Pioneer Press article that does.
 * https://walkerart.org/press-releases/2008/walker-art-centers-worlds-away-new-suburban-l Clund07 (talk) 00:07, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Cewb23 (talk) 21:15, 12 October 2023 (UTC) Thanks @Clund07! Do you recommend I comment on the article's talk page before I add any edits?  Do I contact Carolyn?
 * I think it's relevant enough and innocuous enough that you can just add it (just remember to keep the language neutral) -- you'll also have to leave an edit note, like you had to when you published this page, so if anybody has an issue they'll reply to that or start a Talk thread. I don't think you have to contact or clear it through Carolyn since the video is public and since it's *by* her but not *about* her. Clund07 (talk) 23:19, 12 October 2023 (UTC)