User talk:Cfrench17/sandbox

I have changed the last sentence in the lead in to the Janaki Ammal article. The sentence was redundant and stated 'valuable' and then 'value' in the same sentence. I also added to the location Kerala and specified it is in India.Cfrench17 (talk) 14:43, 25 February 2020 (UTC)

The changes you have made look good and make the sentence flow better. Adding details such as locations is also very important in improving the pages content. Cfcox18 (talk) 18:31, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

What you have in your sandbox is good and you've made thoughtful changes. Good job! AlisonInggs (talk) 22:48, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Your edits look good so far. In terms of reference to the wiki page, I would suggest focusing on citing the information, particularly in the biography in research sections. Also, it might be a good idea to break up the biography section into smaller pieces. A lot of the information in that section could be divided into personal life, career, and research sections. Acriggs18 (talk) 15:58, 2 March 2020 (UTC)