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Hi Cgarc070,

I just finished peer editing your paragraph on Au. garhi, nice work! Let me know if you have any questions or anything about the comments I made, I am happy to help!

Have a great week, Radroni21 (talk) 19:33, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

Hi Cgarc070.

I am lfay002 (Lori Fay) Just finished my peer review. Great job on your entry.

Here are my overall comments in the peer review section:

I think this was very well written. Needs to be broken up into paragraphs, and cited following the information in the paragraphs. If Homo or A. afarensis is mentioned its a good idea to link the topic to its wiki page. The easy way to do this is type homo or Australopithecus, highlight then click the link symbol on the top of the page. This also helps the reader information when they an click on the name and it takes them right to the wiki page of the subject. Well done overall. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lfay002 (talk • contribs) 16:59, 15 May 2020 (UTC)