User talk:Cgolden97/sandbox

Peer Review for Cgolden97's article by Tthoma84
Very interesting and meaningful article to commit to :D -As another Wiki editor pointed out perhaps changing the term "addict" to a less harsh or stereotypical term would be an important edit to make -Great connection to human rights in intro -(Just a suggestions) You could talk about how the "Opioid Epidemic is being represented to the public versus the "Crack Cocaine Epidemic" for a heftier Basic Information or Historical aspect to the article or the media's role in contributing to the stereotyping and discrimination of people who use drugs+I also suspect there are many sources out there that can greater inform the Drugs and HIV Infection section Global Impact section could include links to terms that have been mentioned/written about on Wikipedia -Cite the places where you've paraphrased or included number inside its sentence or paragraph just incase. We don't want any plagiarism scares. -Great sources, maybe mention where your statistics or research comes from in the paragraphs -Either way learned a lot from this article

Cgolden97 Peer Review
Overall you did a fantastic job keeping your information strictly informational versus bias. The information that you are contributing is simple to understand and readers will find your addition to be extremely helpful because it is direct and straight to the point.

A few things I would change would be after you insert facts such as, "Africa has an estimated number 28 million substance users" or "Women in Kenya account for 1/10th of the drug users. " insert a citation for where you got these statistics from, right after you have written the statement. Also, try to elaborate if possible the discrimination drug users in Kenya encounter and how those instances differ if the individual is a woman.

Overall your topic is fascinating and keep up the great work!

EGuss (talk) 04:44, 2 November 2018 (UTC)