User talk:Cgord14/sandbox

The Lead
Your lead is a good start, but it reflects some of the weaknesses in the article. The article has a major problem: many of the sections are about dental care in general, having nothing to do with Australia, and they read like a tutorial. The only relevant sections are "Statistics" and "Fluoridation," and those are the sections you should summarize in your lead. Revise the lead and email me when it's ready. Josef Horáček (talk) 11:03, 26 February 2016 (UTC)


 * The revision is an improvement. You should post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:25, 9 March 2016 (UTC)