User talk:Chahrazad2023

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Referencing
For a biography of a living person (see WP:BLP) all content must be verified by references. Also, a synopsis of her book has no reason to be in an article about her. Submitting this draft via Articles for creation whould just be a waste of a Reviewer's time. David notMD (talk) 03:04, 15 December 2023 (UTC)


 * @David notMD I will correct the article and resubmit it Chahrazad2023 (talk) 08:26, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

Neutral point of view
Also need to remove puffery and peacock wording. For example, "Amira Chahrazad Chenine, author of Hakibatu Achak, (born December 15th, 1991, Mostaganem) is a distinguished English teacher and accomplished researcher renowned..."

Better: "Amira Chahrazad Chenine (born December 15th, 1991) is an English teacher and author."

Also, remove words such as passion, dynamic, serene, dedicated, spirit.... Reduce length by at least 75%, keeping only what can be verified by references. I will add that being author of a book, presenting at conferences, etc. does not make a person Wikipedia-notable. It is possible that no amount of revision will result in an accepted article. David notMD (talk) 10:24, 15 December 2023 (UTC)


 * what if I provide a reference? Chahrazad2023 (talk) 11:30, 15 December 2023 (UTC)

EXAMPLE: Replace what you have as Early Life and Education sections with one short section: Early life and education: Chenine was born on December 15th, 1991, in Ain Tedeles, a small village east of the city of Mostaganem. Algeria. Her cultural heritage is Bani Hilal. She completed undergraduate, masters and doctoral degrees [name the universities, the years, her area(s) of academic focus; and have one or more references to published articles about her that verify this information]. David notMD (talk) 10:42, 15 December 2023 (UTC)


 * How can I generate a table of content? Chahrazad2023 (talk) 11:38, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
 * after you create Section titles the table of content is generated automatically. David notMD (talk) 13:37, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
 * @David notMD well it didn't. Do you think I am making a mistake somewhere? I am learning a lot of things in editing, I'll try different options to make this article well written Chahrazad2023 (talk) 14:37, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
 * I see a Contents box on the left side and a small Infobox on the right. Are you not seeing that? David notMD (talk) 00:52, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * @David notMD I can see the infobox but the content box is t visible for me. I would like to know if the article is meeting requirements as well and whether I need to do more work knowing that it is my first time and so on. thanks David. Chahrazad2023 (talk) 09:21, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * It isn't visible* Chahrazad2023 (talk) 09:22, 16 December 2023 (UTC)

Submiot button
I put a submit button on your draft. Do not submit yet, as needs work. Once submitted, there is a waiting period of days to weeks before a review decides to review it. Actions can be Speedy delete, Accept, Decline, Reject. A reviewer wil lleave comments as to why. David notMD (talk) 01:01, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Sentences such as "Throughout her educational pursuits, Amira showcased dedication and proficiency, as evidenced by her academic excellence." have no place in a Wikipedia article. The reason is that this is seen as your opinion rather than from a reference. As an example of what is needed, I removed promotional wording from the Lead and Early life. You need to do the rest.


 * More to the point, regardless of any improvements, her career does not in my opinion achieve notability in the Wikipedia sense of the word. See WP:NACADEMIC and WP:TOOSOON and WP:GNG. It is obvious that you want this to be an article. It will not be accepted. I recommend abandoning the effort and trying to find other means of contributing to Wikipedia. David notMD (talk) 09:53, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * @David notMD thanks for the instruction. I believe I should edit this and make it meet the requirements. I want this to be a biography of a figure because this is a profile of a writer just like any other writers on his platform that's why I'm working on making this a successful submission. with you advice I believe I can achieve this. Chahrazad2023 (talk) 10:13, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * I wish you well, but will not participate in any more communication. My main focus is improving articles pertaining to nutrition and health. David notMD (talk) 10:15, 16 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Amira Chahrazad Chenine (December 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Amira Chahrazad Chenine and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Amira_Chahrazad_Chenine Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:KylieTastic&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Amira_Chahrazad_Chenine reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

KylieTastic (talk) 13:54, 16 December 2023 (UTC)


 * @KylieTastic dear Kylie, what do you mean by secondary sources? do you think an article published on a new paper about this living person represents a secondary source? and does this help in making this wikipedia biography eligible for publishing? Chahrazad2023 (talk) 14:15, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Yes most newspapers along with many books and other sources are reliable sources - see Reliable sources for a fuller description. All new articles on Wikipedia have to show the subject is notable (See WP:N) which in most cases requires significant coverage (WP:SIGCOV) in multiple independent (WP:INDY) reliable sources (WP:RS). Currently none of your sources even mention the subject. KylieTastic (talk) 14:21, 16 December 2023 (UTC)
 * @KylieTastic I did not pay attention as this is my first time ever using wikipedia edit. in this case, I have 2 newspaper articles talking about this subject and her novel. I will add them to the references. Thank you so much. I'll edit this article and ait for your review before I submit it again. thanks for guidance Chahrazad2023 (talk) 14:25, 16 December 2023 (UTC)