User talk:Chanda10/Trauma and first responders

Peer review for "Trauma and first responders" 1. Review current treatments for PTSD and see if there are any new ones that have popped up that aren't in the article or any treatments that may have been phased out that are still in the article. 2. Check the PTSD regulations section and see if any of that info has been changed since the article was published. Check if any new states should be added, if any of the current states on the list have updated their regulations. 3. Consider doing some research into comorbidities of PTSD and adding some reasons why certain disorders might be comorbid in the "Comorbid disorders" sub-header. 4. Consider finding updated sources for sources 12 and 14, they're from 2002 and 2004 respectively so they may be a tad old.SkyM99 (talk) 23:31, 28 February 2021 (UTC)Sky

''Sky, Thank for the feed back! I appreciate the details and I will absolutley be looking into some of thsoe suggestions! Thank you Chanda10 (talk)Chanda'' — Preceding unsigned comment added by Chanda10 (talk • contribs) 23:39, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Hi! I wrote a peer review in the peer review sandbox https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chanda10/Trauma_and_first_responders/Csanherz_Peer_Review but overall I said that I liked your edits but I would make sure to keep a neutral tone and to make sure your additions go into the correct/best fit sections. I also suggested to find more information about the other disorders that first responders can develop because the article mentioned PTSD, depression, PD, and GAD but only focused on PTSD. Even a simple comment about these other disorders could be a good addition. Csanherz (talk) 23:49, 28 February 2021 (UTC) '''Claudia, I seen it and have replied Thank you so much for your suggestions I will def. be using some of them tonight. Chanda10 (talk)Chanda'''

Hey Chanda! I really like the contributions you have included into the article in your sandbox. I believe the "backpack full of rocks" visualization helps the reader feel the impact these experiences have on first responders' mental health situation. One critique ia have is that some of the punctuation was off and some sentences did not work well together. In the first paragraph yo u do a great job including specific statistics into the document and I feel like more of that style of edit is needed. I also agree with the previous comment stating that you should hold a neutral tone throughout your writing. Keep it up! CannonCH (talk) 01:26, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

'''CannonCH, I will re-read and possibly reword some of the point's you have addressed. Thank you for pointing this out! Chanda10 (talk)Chanda'''