User talk:Changhb/sandbox

3 Strengths

Great connection to identity formation and summary of the different theories that are critical to understanding how crucial of a role personality plays in career development Strong explanation of personality traits-- it makes it easier to understand how personality trait assessments are utilized in the workplace. Good organization and in depth analysis of each theory and relation to career

3 Improvements Make the heading “Career Development and Personality” above the contents page and then make the following headings (ex.Definitions, Identity, Personality Traits etc...) their own headings. The paragraphs on identity, personality traits and personality trait assessments are long and harder to read...if you could try to separate into smaller paragraphs they will be easier to read and look less bulky. Maybe add a brief discussion for the last 4 bullet points; personality/career development/race or gender are inter-related as well

The article looks great! Thanks,

Eileen O'Malley