User talk:Charity joyy/sandbox

Response to your Edits I put on the google doc also:

I like that you added a more recent award.

Did you edit the word or did you add a citation?- Nevermind the definition is through a footnote. That is good.

It's good that you are changing this but maybe also change depathologization- that's confusing terminology also.

This seemed like a much smoother of a transition. Good

Is this explaining Altahusserian Theory? If so, you need a comma so for example: This represented a change in Althusserian theory, a theory that takes structural totals....leadership, the last part. Maybe that doesn't make sense but currently its a little hard to read.

I like that you are changing things to include simplified terminology but make sure you do it throughout so it stays cohesive.