User talk:Charlene.est.33/My sandbox

The last sentence of the first paragraph has confusing wording (I noticed you indicated that in parenthesis following)

Second paragraph: Make sure not to start a sentence with “because,” possibly reword to say “due to”

Notes in the parenthesis seem to offer good advice

Titles seem to not match the content beneath it, perhaps generalize, or create more titles if you’d like to keep them specific

Really great job so far! The article is very informative and thorough and with a few more edits, I think you’ll be ready to publish it!

Emmymorri98 (talk) 15:46, 26 March 2019 (UTC)Emily Morris