User talk:Charleneguo/sandbox

Munseong Chang Peer Review
Hey! I thought this was extremely well written! All of your subtitles and sections are appropriately labelled according to the content. I thought you did a good job of providing statistics and keeping a neutral tone of voice throughout your article. There are a bunch of credible sources in the bottom and I like how they're appropriately included throughout your article! If I could suggest one change to this article, I would suggest that you divide up your first "Usage" section into one or two subsections like you do with your health concerns section. Possibly "Popularity" or something along those lines might be helpful! Otherwise I enjoyed reading your article! Edwarchng (talk)