User talk:CharlesForbes918/sandbox

Lake page edits
Good work on your edits - you've found a lot of good info to add!

Your section overlaps quite a bit with Danielle's. You may need to delete or move around some info when moving your edits to the live page to make sure your sections work well together.

The second half of your section has good in-text citations, but the first half is missing citations entirely. Where did this information come from? Make sure you have a credible source for all information you have included here.

Avoid editorializing - some of your phrases such as "helped the ecology to blossom" are straying from neutral, factual Wikipedia-type writing.

Good job on linking to other Wikipedia articles! And references section at the end looks good.

Egeorge1 (talk) 20:42, 15 March 2023 (UTC)