User talk:Charliek7133/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
I see that you've completed the tutorials and selected some articles, but I don't see your copyediting contribution. You should catch up! Josef Horáček (talk) 21:00, 21 February 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw your copyediting. Some of your edits were better than others. For example, what you thought was a run-on sentence was actually fine. On the other hand, I appreciate that you removed a phrase that was not only redundant, it was also far too subjective. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:36, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
I look forward to your work on this assignment. Catch up soon! Josef Horáček (talk) 21:41, 3 March 2018 (UTC)


 * Your sources look good. Add them to the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:23, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I didn't find the sources in the article. For a better grade, add them within the next two days. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:54, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I saw you added the sources to the article. There were some problems with the formatting, but we'll have to leave that for others to fix. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 16:31, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Army Body Composition Program"
This article is a mess, so a simple and clear lead will be a big improvement. Go ahead and post a draft within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:08, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * I don't see your draft in the sandbox. Please post it soon! Josef Horáček (talk) 23:53, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Go ahead and add the new draft (Normalization process model) to the article. If you add this lead, though, you will also need to break up the rest of the article into sections with headers. Make at least two sections. Do this in the next two days. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:59, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks for adding the lead. You're done! Josef Horáček (talk) 16:25, 6 May 2018 (UTC)