User talk:Charlotteemery

Your submission at Articles for creation: Venetian helmet-crown (January 16)
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 >SerialNumber 54129 ...speculates 18:00, 16 January 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Venetian helmet-crown
Hi, I'm interested in the above draft that you submitted to Articles for creation (Afc). Although it wasn't successful this time, with some work I think it could be. There's another issue in that a near-duplicate draft exists, here, Draft:Süleyman the Magnificent's Venetian Helmet-Crown. Obviously we don't want two articles on the same topic, but I think a blend of the two articles, supplemented with some extra sources, could work. I wonder if you would talk to the other editor, here, User talk:JohnEricMiller, and see if you can agree a way forward? I'd be very happy to help. Two quick things, it certainly needs your illustration, but the consensus among editors I've talked to is that the other title would be clearer, i.e., S the M's Venetian helmet-crown. This brings up more sources in a Google search. If you've any questions, just ask. All the best. KJP1 (talk) 07:09, 17 January 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Venetian helmet-crown has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Venetian helmet-crown. Thanks! KJP1 (talk) 07:19, 17 January 2018 (UTC)