User talk:Charlottespohler/Reyhan Jamalova

Great start to this Wiki page! Everything looks great -- I would just recommend further insights into Jamalova's motivation to start the Rainergy project, which can be done through researching personal interviews conducted by reliable sources that you can find online. Overall, enjoyed reading this page a lot!

I really enjoyed this topic!! I would add some more basic information and consider answering some of the questions I listed in my peer review. I think by answering those questions you give the reader more insight and information about the topic as a whole. One other thing I would consider changing is the tone of the article. Right now it reads as a story rather than as concrete facts. Overall you have a lot of good work here and I am excited to see the finished product!! Nice job :) Katieshanley13 (talk) 21:21, 6 February 2022 (UTC)