User talk:Charlottetim/sandbox

Hi! I think your article is concise and really easy to read, although I advise you to check some grammar mistakes that make some parts/ sentences a bit unclear: "This makes why more standardized comprehensive schools provide a higher level of educational equity than more differentiated tracked schools" --> Rephrase. When you mention "The effects of tracking are that students are both viewed and treated differently depending on which track they take" you are not really clear on what being viewed and treated differently means. In 'Tracking systems' try to replace the word -Differentiation- fo another word sometimes, or find a way to rephrase without using it that much. In overall your article is easy to read and well written, you also did a good job with referencing. :)