User talk:Charms022/sandbox

In your wiki page, you are missing several parts that are required as part of the wiki rubric grade. You are missing mechanism, causes, prevention, and recent research. In your diagnosis, you should include more information as to how someone can determine if they have this disease. If possible, try to include more sources. Try to include a picture of someone having the disease. Overall, it is a great start on your wiki disease.

Bp908 (talk) 19:57, 10 November 2017 (UTC)Bansi Patel

Great start to the page, however, you are missing main portions from the rubric. History can be summarized and incorporated into the abstract if needed. Also presentation is not needed and can be incorporated elsewhere. I think you are doing a great job with citing things and references. Great job! -- Roma Patel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rpatel74 (talk • contribs) 05:08, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Love that the abstract is concise and easy to understand. Mechanism and causes still need to be addressed. Would love to see a picture of the disease or cell area. Although it would be nice to see more sources, like my disease, it may be difficult to find sources. Remember to search google scholar as well as the online library databases. - Glenn Lopez -Glopez03 (talk) 22:06, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

--Sweiner02 (talk) 05:19, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Abstract needs mroe about disease.
 * It looks like you have been editing the original, not your sandbox version. Do not do this until the very end! please copy your edits back to your sandbox and only work there.
 * Missing major sections, nearly everything needs more detail.
 * Make sure to cite your additions.
 * This is so early that I don't feel like I can usefully comment.
 * Your citations are not added properly. come get help.