User talk:CheeseBurgerDude79/sandbox

Morgan's feedback
Try adding the citations, you have very few. Also add more Wikipedia links. Daileymn (talk) 17:40, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Deven's Feedback
Your section on WWII is very limited, and seems to add nothing significant to the article.PowersD (talk) 19:05, 24 October 2018 (UTC)

Julia feedback
Try playing around with the order to help organize it better. the structure might need work because I was confused with all of the different sub sections. I think the information you have is strong and gives us better detail on the topic. Try to expand on the sections. Add more citations and pictures.

Kile's Edits (following peer review)
I added in more citations and tried to add in as many Wikipedia articles I could. I didn't change the layout at all or the organization because everything was chronological. I also completed the WWII section in the article and included more information in the Post 9-11 section.CheeseBurgerDude79 (talk) 19:03, 26 October 2018 (UTC)