User talk:CheeseSauce15/sandbox

Your plans for work should also be on this talk page, not the one with the goat. Also, make sure you aren't publishing "batch edits". You should not make multiple substantive changes and then publish them all at once, you need to publish and describe those changes as you go. Beyond that you have made some good additions, but you need to work on identifying peer-reviewed academic citations (which none of these appear to be). You might want to set up a meeting with Kristina De Voe the comm and english librarian to help walk you through that research process.Adrishaw (talk) 22:43, 22 March 2021 (UTC)