User talk:Chefmikesf/sandbox/Philip Kantoff2

Updating Philip Kantoff Bio
Hello again : I made another pass at Philip Kantoff's article and noticed some updates. I used the secondary sources to clean up the article and made additions to the article in the Lead, Career, and External links section. Would you be open to reviewing my User:Chefmikesf/sandbox/Philip Kantoff2?--Chefmikesf (talk) 23:23, 20 October 2021 (UTC)