User talk:Chelms6/José Antonio García (journalist)

"Kamartin2 peer review" I feel like you have some good details and information to go off of for your article. There are a couple things you could work on though that I picked up on while reading your article. Your sentence structure and puncuation was something I notice first off, like some of your sentences could be put together so you aren't repeating yourself. That was my second thing I notice. Some of the stuff sounded repeative.

Kamartin2Kamartin2 (talk) 01:58, 24 October 2012 (UTC)