User talk:Chelsei.L/Oyster reef restoration/Kith98 Peer Review

Response to Peer Review
We appreciate the feedback you have given on our article. My group and I are a bit confused because we noticed that you stated that we used first person perspective in our article. Can you please show us where we used first person perspective because we did not mean to but we appreciate you realizing that we did.Additionally we noticed you stated our topic does not have any supporting sources to advocate for our evidence, however we cited the sources that we got factual information from in which were peer reviewed articles. You also stated we must add more connections to relate back to the urban ecology theme, and we agree we will add more evidence/ information to present the theme in a more clear way. We also acknowledged that we did not add any new information in our lead section we will definitely be adding more content there. We will correct the structure of our article to have a better flow for the readers. Thank you we appreciate the time you took to give us amazing feedback! :)Chelsei.L (talk) 20:38, 27 October 2022 (UTC)