User talk:Chenzw/Archives/May 2018

06:43:03, 14 May 2018 review of submission by TheMainAttraction
Can you tell me how to fix the issue with my page getting declined? You said it sound like an advertisement but that about a famous rapper. Everything is facts. He has been on Dallas main radio stations and some outside of the city/states. I been trying this for 6 months and can't seem to get it right maybe you can help me with it personally since you reviewed it. This is a link for proof https://thebeatdfw.com/2952711/raising-the-bar-w-tma-ft-new-boyz-gwolla-video/

His personal pages are below if you want to check him out www.faceook.com/TheMainAttractionTMA/ www.twitter.com/WhoisTMA www.instagram.com/WhoisTMA

TheMainAttraction (talk) 06:43, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
 * The article is not written in a neutral fashion. Examples of some problematic areas:
 * "Even though he had established songs with various major/signed artists, he decided to release his solo debut album "Life Before TMA"(July 7, 2017)." - what is the relevance? To put it another way, so what if he had "established songs with various major/signed artists", and how does that make his release of his solo album significant?
 * "It doesn’t take a rocket scientist to notice that this Music Mogul have more to offer than just talent, his entrepreneurial mentality might be the perfect marketing tool." - this is a blatantly promotional statement and is indicative of bias.
 * "The rapper “TheMainAttraction” also owns a well received clothing brand" - where is the evidence for the brand being "well received"?
 * "I feel that this young rapper/entrepreneur has a lot to bring to the music industry with his creative mentality and diverse music style." - this statement is not suitable for inclusion in an encyclopedia article.
 * Please also refer to the links that I have given in the decline reason. Chenzw    Talk   07:43, 14 May 2018 (UTC)