User talk:Chianyadri/sandbox

This was easy to read, and feels like it would go well with the current wiki article on Trask. The structure is clear and the content is neutral. I feel like the coverage would be more balanced if you could find anything about Trask's parents. I can't comment on sources because I don't see any cited in your sandbox. The most important thing you could do is add more details, which I think you're in the process of doing. I think that the comment about Trask coming from a political family was one that gave me more insight on who she was as a person so I wanted to know more about that.

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You are very succinct and concise when talking about Trask's education, which I appreciate. I would suggest being more specific on what she majored in for her Bachelor's, Master's, and PhD, or possibly word it differently so it's clearly defined that she earned a degree of political science in all degrees (i.e. "Trask earned a Bachelor's, Master's and PhD from University of Wisconsin, Madison". I also was wondering if you could find more information on the dissertation she wrote. When was this written? You're doing great! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gbarton1732 (talk • contribs) 21:13, 11 October 2018 (UTC)

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Hi there. Thank you for this great advice! - Chianyadri